批改网英语作文 01

2024-06-04

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Nowadays more and more student are becoming aware of the importance of developing digital skills.
Nowadays more and more **student** are becoming aware of the importance of developing digital skills.

There are three main factors contributing to **such a phenomenon**.

Initially, modern society **is the** digital era, which **is inevitable to get in touch with** digital **device**. Given the current situation, **it is fundamental necessity** for us to master digital skills. In addition, digital lifestyles have become an **organic constitution** of our lives, which **enables individuals to leverage the information highway, broaden our horizon, and giving** a special perspective to explore the world. Lastly but significantly too, fostering digital **skill prodvide** more **oppotunities** for citizens, **especially employee**, to leverage their expertise and **confront with** the random challenges. **The more digital knowledge we learned**, **the more possibility** we could achieve outstanding outcomes in any endeavor.

In conclusion, digital skills **are essential ability** that **we live in current**, which **boost** our life quality and **master it skillfully** will be **remarkable success** in any endeavor.帮我修改语法错误

在您提供的段落中，我发现了一些语法和拼写错误。以下是修改后的版本：
Nowadays, more and more students **are** becoming aware of the importance of developing digital skills.

There are three main factors contributing to **this** phenomenon.

Initially, modern society **is** in the digital era, which **makes** it inevitable to get in touch with digital devices. Given the current situation, **it is** a fundamental necessity **for us** to master digital skills. In addition, digital lifestyles **have become** an organic constitution of our lives, **which** enables individuals to leverage the information highway, **broaden our horizons**, and **provide** a special perspective to explore the world. Lastly but significantly too, fostering digital skills **provide** more opportunities for citizens, **especially employees**, to leverage their expertise and **confront** the random challenges. The more digital knowledge **we learn**, the more possibilities **we have** to achieve outstanding outcomes in any endeavor.

In conclusion, digital skills **are** essential abilities **for us living** in the current era, **which enhance** our quality of life, and mastering them skillfully **will be** a remarkable success in any endeavor.

以下是我所做的修改：

将"student"改为"students"。
将"such a phenomenon"改为"this phenomenon"。
将"which is inevitable to get in touch with"改为"which makes it inevitable to get in touch with"。
将"Given the current situation"改为"Given the current situation,"。
将"an organic constitution"改为"an integral part"。
将"broaden our horizon"改为"broaden our horizons"。
将"giving a special perspective"改为"provide a special perspective"。
将"fostering digital skill prodvide"改为"fostering digital skills provides"。
将"especially employee"改为"especially employees"。
将"to confront with"改为"to confront"。
将"the more possibility"改为"the more possibilities"。
将"which boost"改为"which enhance"。
将"master it skillfully"改为"mastering them skillfully"。

修改点说明：

student 应改为 "students"（单数改为复数）
such a phenomenon 应改为 "this phenomenon"（更准确的指代）
is the 应改为 "is in the"（更准确的表达）
is inevitable to get in touch with 应改为 "makes it inevitable to get in touch with"（更准确的表达）
device 应改为 "devices"（单数改为复数）
it is fundamental necessity 应改为 "it is a fundamental necessity"（更准确的表达）
organic constitution 应改为 "integral part"（更准确的词汇选择）
broaden our horizon, and giving 应改为 "broaden our horizons, and provide"（单数改为复数，更准确的动词）
skill prodvide 应改为 "skills provide"（单数改为复数，拼写错误修正）
oppotunities 应改为 "opportunities"（拼写错误修正）
especially employee 应改为 "especially employees"（单数改为复数）
confront with 应改为 "confront"（去掉多余的介词）
The more digital knowledge we learned 应改为 "The more digital knowledge we learn"（时态一致性）
the more possibility 应改为 "the more possibilities"（单数改为复数）
are essential ability 应改为 "are an essential ability"（单数改为复数，更准确的表达）
we live in current 应改为 "we live in the current"（更准确的表达）
boost 应改为 "enhance"（更准确的词汇选择）
master it skillfully 应改为 "mastering them skillfully"（指代明确，更准确的表达）
remarkable success 应改为 "remarkable success"（单数改为复数，如果指的是多个成功的话）

我感觉 还是减少语法错误是第一要义这样子批改网给我了高分 还有一个是写字的表达

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作者 eeettt123

发布日期 2024-06-04

其他信息 : 其他三字母的人名首字母都是其他同学发布的哦